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Unsuspected Suspect PT 1

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Somewhere in the bad lands of the deteriorating presence of the UNSC, somewhere that only those who have been there can find, somewhere that doesn't exist, is a facility. A facility disguised as a wrecked munitions factory. Usually the only life found in this place is a mixture of birds and the occasional feral dog but today, there were three intruders. Three specialist agents sat on a rooftop looking down at the disguised facility, they had been scouting for weeks and it was looking promising for them. They had taken shelter in what was an old overseer office for one of the former factories. The trio was made up of two men and a single woman and not a single one had stopped arguing since they got there.
One of the agents was sat by a pack of rations with a burner, without a flame he can't cook "Where's the bloody lighter?" He looked to the woman who was sat with a rifle pointing it down onto the factory floor. His deep Scottish accent rattled through the room
"How the feck should I know... your'e the daft bastard that feckin packed it" The woman spat back through her strong Irish brogue.
"Ten years and you two still can't fucking admit it" The last of the three was laying on his front watching out at the factory in question. 
"Admit to fucken what" The Scott jumped up, as he did the lighter fell out of one of his pouches. "... There's meh fucken lighter" He grumbled as he sat back down and lit the burner up to cook. "Any luck M?" The Scott Added.
"MacKenzie... How many times do I have to say it..." The Britt rolled over as he snapped back.
"Geese... yeh sorry... You're not Michigan anymore... we get it" The Scott formally known as agent Louisiana put a pot above the burner and placed some food in it.
"Bleedin Scotts... always the slowest to learn" The woman said.
"Oi... shut it Clover...." 
"It's feckin Sara... how many times do I have to feckin spell it out to you, William"
"Shut iiit... I think somethings going on" 
"Sorry H..." They both said at the same time.
"Oi... MacKenzie come up here and take a look at that entrance"
"Sure..." MacKenzie got up and walked towards Horatio and kneeled down as he was handed the binoculars.
"Does that wall kinda look like a door to you?" 
"Yeah... concealed entrance... wait I think..."
"It's opening... What the hell" Horatio zoomed in with his helmet, although he had a lesser quality in his screen he could still make out several figures exiting the facility.
"Im counting... 7 sim troopers and... no wait it can't be" MacKenzie couldn't get his words out, he was frozen in place.
"What... for the love of god What is it" Horatio snatched the binoculars off of MacKenzie and looked down them. He stood and watched as a teal blue figure walked out of the entrance. "How the fuck... It can't be... she's dead" Horatio slowly lowered his binoculars and looked at MacKenzie. "Did she seem a little..."
"Sombre... down... crappy?" MacKenzie interrupted Horatio.
"I think he's in there... He's gotta be..."
"Whose the cute one with the little yellow stripes?" Sara asked
"Never mind that... we gotta get in there" Horatio said as he picked up his rifle. "Mac... would the dead bolt breakers work on a door without power?"
"Ummm yeah should do... take a bit longer though"
"Good... Sara, radio it in, we are investigating possible location of suspect 1 and we have got secondary interests in the field, permission to intercept" Horatio ordered.
"Yes boss.." The Irish woman said ash she went over to her radio pack.
"Gear up, forget about the food, I want to be at that door ASAP
okay, quick Mini series here XP just taking a quick break from MIA then I'll be back on track.
In case you don't know, this is the same facility that they were at, at the end of series 10.
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Dragotan's avatar
Very nice! Your writing has improved since we first met, quiet alot. This is very interesting and exciting, I like a good mystery! :'D